实例揭秘中考英语分档作文是何标准？

　　原标题：实例揭秘中考英语分档作文是何标准？

　　实例揭秘中考英语分档作文是何标准？

　　文/安颖/北京西城中学英语教师

　　情景作文

　　国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。

　　姓名 王珊 性别 女 年龄 16岁 学校 北京阳光中学

　　其他 爱好音乐摄影，善于与人交流，乐于助人，热爱自然，热爱和平

　　参加夏令营目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化

　　评分原则：

　　1. 总分15分，按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档（7-9分）。

　　2. 评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

　　3. 总词数不足的，可在本题总得分中扣去1分。

　　4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1分），内容9分（其中要点5分，语意连贯4分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（4分），词数（1分）。

　　5. 拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

　　各档次的给分范围和要求：

　　一类（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标点错误。

　　二类（10-12分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。

　　三类（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。

　　四类（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。

　　五类（0-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。

　　第一档 13-15

　　My name is Wang Shan. I’m a 16-year-old girl studying in Beijing Yangguang Middle school. Listening to the music and taking photos are my favorite things to do in my spare time. I’m good at communicating with others and always ready to help other people. Furthermore, I love nature. Wherever I’m free, I’ll travel to beautiful natural attractions to experience natural wonders with my family. In addition, I love peace, for I hope all nations in the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life.

　　The purpose of my intending to join the Peace and Friendshoip Summer Camp is to make more friends from foreign countries, and to have an access to the insight of foreign cultures. I hope I can do something for the world peace, and I’m sure I’ll be learning a lot from the Summer Camp.

　　第二档 10-12

　　My name is Wangshan. I am a 16 girl who studies in Beijing Sunshine Middle School. I am fond of music and taking video. Communicating with people is also a good habit which I have. I’/p>

　　I plan to take part in this summer action. I believe that I can make many friends and know more abut the other countries. I believe that I can contribute my strength to making a world full of friendship and peaceful.

　　第三档 7-9

　　My name is Wang Shan. I’m a sixteen-years-old girl who studys in Beijing Sunshine Middle School. I fond of music and taking video. Comunciting with people is also a good habit which I have. I’m an enthusiastic person who likes to help others. I love nature and peace. All of these make me fill of confidence.

　　I plan to take part in this summer action. I believe that I can make many friends and know more about other countries. I believe that I can contribute my strength to making a world full of friendship and peaceful.

　　第四档 4-6

　　My name is wang shan. I’m sixteen years old. I study at Beijing yang guang Middle school. I’am a happy girl, music, computer, PE and math I like all. and I like help other, like muter life If I have some time I hope to know more friends. join the I was very happy. it not only let me study some thing But also lat me know and find some’s build food and langry. I can make some friend and some teacher so I like very much for it.

　　第五档 0-3

　　My name is wangsan, is Beijing Yang Guang school. I like muise, and I perso nalieies is happy.

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