托福培训写作之病句解析
什么事托福写作的破碎句。所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。
托福写作的时候大家是不是经常会出现病句,可能你在写的时候根本就没有发现,为了大家在托福写作的时候病句会少出现,今天雅思的小编就给大家说说托福写作的一些病句分析。
1、 破碎句
所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。
破碎句:She singing alone. (无谓语,singing是现在分词)
正确句:She is singing alone.
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)
正确句:He did not come because he was sick.
2、接连句
所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。
接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3、托福培训写作之病句解析句子连接不正确
所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。
不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so thereis no change in the composition of the chalk.
下面雅思在给大家看看托福写作的高分表达:
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒装句:Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)
正常句:The internet provides people access to the latest information.
强调句:It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)
正常句:The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
上述的这些就是今天小编给大家分析的几个病句,大家看看你在托福写作的时候是不是也犯过类似的错误呢?其实犯错误不可怕,怕的是你不愿意改正,所以雅思提醒大家一定要好好改正。